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Interesting Journey with Suspense"
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By:
Diya,
KARACHI
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Jan, 31 2012
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not so good, some common mistakes show that you have not studied it after composing. some grammatical errors are also included.
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By:
Mudassir Riaz,
Faisalabad.
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Nov, 23 2011
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aaaaahhhhhhh awsum full of suspense i was expecting something thrilling but.........anyhow gud.
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By:
asma,
sahiwal
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May, 29 2011
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that is a true story.bro
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By:
chaand,
changa manga
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May, 14 2011
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very suspensive journy
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By:
aamir,
faisalabad
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Apr, 02 2011
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nice and interesting characters are in this journey with u.
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By:
zafar ahmed khan,
Karachi
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Jan, 25 2011
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Thanks sir Syed Abu Mokaarim.
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By:
SAIF ASHIR,
Karachi
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Jan, 12 2011
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Must be a memorable journey but you showed your good skills on writing as well. Kee it up.
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By:
Syed Abu Mokaarim,
Karachi
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Jan, 12 2011
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