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nice...khush rhin.
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By:
Numan Iqbal,
Faislabad
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May, 20 2013
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Azra sahiba ! bilkul durust farmaya aap ne , agarche hamain nisf sadi se zyadah arsa ho chukka hai aazad huay magar abhi tak ham zeni taur per aazad nahin ho sake hain , aghyar kay diay hoay road map per chalne ki koshish main ghair yaqeeni ki talwar apne saron per khud hi latka laite hain .
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By:
hamid raza khan,
karachi
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May, 20 2013
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| ہر اک قدم پہ خدا ہیں تمہا ری بستی میں |
DEAR MASOOD SB.
WHAT A CLASSIC,SPECIALLY KEEPING IN VIEW,THE GENERAL ACCEPTANCE OF ORDERLY DISORDERED AND MALIGNED PRACTICES,IN LAST SO MANY YEARS IN OUR COUNTRY AND WITHIN ELITES,RUNNING THE SHOW.
BOHOT KHOOB SOORTI SE AAP NE HAMAR IRD GIRD KE PEHLE TANNAFFUR KI NISHAN DAHI TO ZAROOR KI AUR IS KO KHOOB UJAGAR O AASHKARA KIA.
KIA KHOOB HO AB AAP AGLI DAFA ISKA MADAWA NAZAM KAREIN?
BEHERHAAL QAUM NE KUCH NA KUCH ELECTIONS MEIN IZHAR KIA HAI AUR KAAFI JAGHON PER FAISLA BHI SUNAYA.
RGDS.
HABIB
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By:
habib,
karachi
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May, 17 2013
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| تپتے ھوئے صحراؤں میں اک فصل کٹی ھے |
Thanks Shahbano ..
Sorry for delay reply just today I have seen you
very nice comments .. thanks for appreciation and
for liking .. Be Happy always with Great Smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Alkhobar
on
May, 16 2013
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| خوشحالی کا دور آیا ہے مدتوں بعد |
Very nice Jamil bhai...
Democracy has its own beauty and we should
pray that this time true democracy comes to our
beloved country....
Elections were successful and this time nice turn out which
shows the maturity of our national thoughts...
may allah bless our nation always...
hmesha khush rhain aur aisay hi achha achha likhtay rhain
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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May, 16 2013
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| خوشحالی کا دور آیا ہے مدتوں بعد |
Bohat achi shayri hai waqt k aen
mutabic
jamil bhia bihat mubarak baad qbool karen
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By:
dr.zahid sheikh,
lahore,pakistan
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May, 16 2013
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| خوشحالی کا دور آیا ہے مدتوں بعد |
lovely poetry as usual but
on reality of life.....aghr
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By:
asghar,
birmingham
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May, 15 2013
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| خوشحالی کا دور آیا ہے مدتوں بعد |
Dear Jamil bhai ..
Election kay hawalay say very nice poetry ..
Ya you are right new time new Pakistan and new Government ...
In Sha Allah now country will come on right track ...
Bahut acha likha aur shandar likha.. bahut daad kabool karain ...
Be Happy always with Great Smile
Shabeeb Hashmi
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
on
May, 15 2013
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| بیاد وطن |
Bohat umda Hamid
Hasb e mamool bohat kharey kharey andaz main
jo bhi dil main tha keh dia.
Daad ke phool
Aur
Duain aap ke liye.
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By:
Azra Naz,
Reading UK
on
May, 15 2013
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Wah Hamid
Bohat umda.
Bilkul drust kaha aap ne.
Apna aik sher arz hai
Be Yaqeeni Ki Hai Talwar Saron Par Latki
Kis Liye Rang Bharey Khawab Buney Ga Koi
Daad qabool ho.
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By:
Azra Naz,
Reading UK
on
May, 15 2013
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