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| تیری یاد میں بےقرار ہےدل |
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Well done Asghar really very nice poetry. Keep it up. Allah bless you.
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By:
Gulzareen Pasha Zareen,
Rawalpindi
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May, 21 2013
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| زمانے کے دھوکے میں آتے رہے |
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Very true and nice poetry Rizwana ji. Keep it up and be smile forever.
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By:
Gulzareen Pasha Zareen,
Rawalpindi
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May, 21 2013
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| کچل ڈالی ھے ہر خواہش تمنا ہر مٹا ڈالی |
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Thank you so much Zahid bhaye. It is your greatness. Be happy forever.
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By:
Gulzareen Pasha Zareen,
Rawalpindi
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May, 21 2013
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| اے کاش وہ طلبگار ہمارا تو ہو |
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Arooj my sister you poetry is so nice and I am fully agreed with you.......always stay save.....bye bye
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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May, 21 2013
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| میری جان |
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Ayesh sister.......your thoughts in verses are awesome!!!! be happy......
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
on
May, 21 2013
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| کافی لوگوں کا ادھار۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔ |
What a fantastic and full of amusing poetry Asghar Bhai.......Your are brave that you survive in four
although one is enough for weeping in this busy life.....well done....be brave and stay save.....bye bye....
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
on
May, 21 2013
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| تیری یاد میں بےقرار ہےدل |
Asghar Bahi it is outstanding and unique poetry.......Your simple but meaningful verses
are superb........Love to read you.....
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
on
May, 21 2013
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| تیری یاد میں بےقرار ہےدل |
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Asghar saheb . App ka Jawab Nahein
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By:
A.S.Arif ,
Mississauga
on
May, 21 2013
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| میری جان |
Ayesha Dear
Kia huseen aur dilkash andaz main
ashaar likhey hai aap ne.
Bohat pasand aaye.Hamesha yoon hi
likhti rahain.
Daad qabool karain.
Khush rahain.
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By:
Azra Naz,
Reading UK
on
May, 21 2013
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| کافی لوگوں کا ادھار۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔ |
Wah wah wah
Maza aa geya.Kia rooh ko gudgudaney wala mazahia
kalam takhliq kia hai jisey parh kar be sakhta hansi aa
gayee.
Bohat huseen aur sachey kheyalat ka izhar barey shagufta
aur dilnashin andaz main kar ke aap ne bohat mehzooz kia hai.
Daad ke phool
Duain#
Hazir hain.
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By:
Azra Naz,
Reading UK
on
May, 21 2013
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