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i hope ke app apni passand behter se behter banane ki koshish kare gen............always b happy
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
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Aug, 17 2012
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Nahin sumera ji ismein mind karne ki koi baat nahin hai... maine to sirf koshish ki thi aapko kuchh sunane ki...ab agar aapko pasand nahin aayee to ismein meri badqismati hai...aapka koi qusur nahin... isliye main mind nahin karunga ... promise...ok .... khush raho
saba ji aapka shukriya...nahin ye puri maine nahin likhi .... aakhri 2 misre mere hain...baqi pata nahin kiski hai... saba ji aapka indore (India) mein koi friend hai kya?
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By:
Hashim,
Jaipur (India)
on
Aug, 14 2012
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achi hai lekin itni bhi khas nahi hai....................please don,t mind
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
on
Aug, 03 2012
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hashim bhai buht nice potry hai ager ap ny khud likha ha tu wahhhhhhh what a an answer,,,,,
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By:
saba,
lahore
on
Aug, 02 2012
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Aane ek larke ke liye likha ....Main aapko ek larki ke liye sunata hun.....
Kahin Ek Maasoom Nazuk Si Larki
Bahut Khubsurat Magar Sanwli Si
Chalo Khat Likhen Ji Mein Aata Bhi Hoga
Magar Ungliyan Kanpkanpaati Bhi Hongi
Qalam Haath Se Chhut Jata Bhi Hoga
Umangen Qalam Phir Uthaati Bhi Hongi
Mera Naam Apni Hatheli Pe Likh Kar
Woh Daanton Mein Ungli Dabaati Bhi Hogi
Seene Se Aanchal Sarakta Bhi Hoga
Woh Takiye Mein Sar Ko Chhupati Bhi Hogi
Meri Jaan Hai Woh Mera Pyaar Hai Woh
Ye Baaten Woh Sabko Batati Bhi Hogi
Kahin Ek Maasoom Nazuk Si Larki
Bahut Khubsurat Magar Sanwli Si
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By:
Hashim,
Jaipur (India)
on
Aug, 01 2012
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thanks..............yes mein junior poetess...
always b happy
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
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Jul, 30 2012
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very nice u r a poet
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By:
fazilat mallick,
riyad
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Jul, 27 2012
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