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حسیب صاحب اس فورم میں کون پاگل ھے
وہ تو یہاں کے لوگوں کو پتا ھے
میں اپنے میاں مٹوں نہیں ھوں
میں نے صرف ایسی دل کے لئے لکھتی ھوں
لیکن اب تو بات انا کی ھے
دوستوں میں مقام کی ھے
رھی بات اصغر جی کی وھی روز میری رائے ھے
اور دیتی رھو گئ جا بھی رھوں گئ پر ھر نظموں میں وشمہ کا نام دیکھوں گے:)
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By:
washma,
moscow
on
Jul, 12 2012
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اصغر جی میں آپ کی نظمے پڑھنے روز آؤں گی
پر اب میں اس فورم میں نکھر کر آؤں گی
اب کچھہ بنکر ھم آئیں گےانشاالله وشمہ خان
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By:
وشمہ خان,
moscow
on
Jul, 09 2012
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Mujhe acha lage ga tm education hasil kro .ye bt m ne hr br boli yd hoga . Asal m tm pagal hote ja rhe ho apny demag ka elaj b krwao madam . Aur ye forum hai koi b kuch b likh sakta hai kise ko b tm khud ko kuch zaida he khush fehmi m ho .aur wahan jao jahan achy log tmhe lift krwaye ...
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By:
Haseeb,
Karachi
on
Jul, 09 2012
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HAHAHAHHH HASEEB Q KARNY SE PELAY AAP AANHKY KOL KER MERE BARE MAIN KAE???AAP COMPARE KISI BHI CHEES SE KAR LE AAP K KOE BHI COMMTT PAR KAR KIA ANDAZA LAGTA HAIN
KHUDA NY HAR CHEES SE NAWA ZA HAIN?I AM COMPLETLY
RAHE EUDCATION KI ABHI ZINDAGI BAKI URDU MAIN AAP KO INSHULAAH KUCH KAR K DEHAKO GE EK BAR MERA VIST PAKISTAN KA LAG JE
ASGHAR JI SAB JATA HAIN UNE SEHKANY KI KOE ZARRAT NAHI JABI AAP NY UNKI POETRY MAIN BAATO SE PHOOL BARSAE HAIN
YAHA JO BHI UNE BURA KAE GA MAIN AOO GE BECOSE I LIKE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ALSO HUMSAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII HON AUR MERA HAQ BANTA HAIN K MAIN UNKA KHAIL RAHKO AUR JO LOG JALTE HAIN UNE HAWA DO JALO AUR JALO :)
AB TOO AAP NY MUJE ???
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By:
washma khan,
Moscow
on
Jul, 06 2012
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khubsorat aakhon walo k dil bhi khubsorat hoty hain,,,
bcuz aakhain sach kehte hain , dil ka hal Allah k siwa koi nahi janta
saare baat apni jaga , per ye intekhwab acha hai
regards
haseeb khan
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By:
HASEEB,
KARACHI
on
Jul, 06 2012
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ASGHAR BHAI AAP KHUD HE SAB JANTY HAIN WASHMA K BARE M KYA KAHON . WOH JO LIKTE HAI WOH AAP JANTY HAIN NA ,. KHAIR HAI AB MAIN AA GAYA KOI MAZAK NAHI UDHYE GA OK , LAKIN AAP WASHMA IS LIYE LIKE KARTY HAIN IS KO REMAIN TYPE TK KARNA NAHI ATA AUR RAHE BAAT POETRY KI TOH SAB DIL REKHNE K LIYE LIKHTE HAIN AUR WOH MADAM PATA NAHI KHUD KO SUPERIOR SAMAJNE LAGE HAI JO WOH HAI NAHI .
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By:
HASEEB,
KARACHI
on
Jul, 06 2012
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WASHMA TUMHARE PASS HAI KYA AUR TUM KYA JO TUM SE KOI JALE GA ??????????????
TUMHARE APNI SOOCH HAI BADAL DALO TOH ACHA HAI
ASGHAR BHAI BUS KYA LIKHON MAIN KAHAN THA .
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By:
HASEEB,
KARACHI
on
Jul, 06 2012
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dehka kitny kubsurat andaz se ye baat kae hain deh le haseeb un k yahi andaz muje bout passend hain aap muje jo chahe kae lakeen ager aap ny asgher ji k reply ka commttt parah hae too pier aap samj ge ho ge k ander ki khubsurti kia hain
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By:
washma khan,
MOSCOW
on
Jul, 05 2012
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Washma yaqeen karein mein
likhte huay yehi soch rah tha
k aap aisa kehein gi...ASGR
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By:
asghar,
birmingham
on
Jul, 03 2012
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Haseeb bhai sab loug humaara
mazaq udaate reh aap itni
dair kahan reh Asghr
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By:
Asghr,
birmingham
on
Jul, 03 2012
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ohhhh mere kuda ya areej se janchuti too sawera ny gheer leya sewra se jan bachi tooo haseeb beche lag gaya
aap sab ko kia takleef hain ager ache comtt nahi dete too na de par had ho ge jalny ki bhi aur badameesi ki
ussli main aise badmeez nojawno ko dislike karti hon jiny koe respect nahi hain
main hon na unki har poetry main commtt deny k le
larkio ki badmizi samaj aati hain lakeen male jale ye kamaal hain muje un ka andaz acha lagta hain aap ko takleef hain aap na pare
asghar jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ab aap leeky ye sab aap se jales hain
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By:
washma khan,
moscow
on
Jul, 03 2012
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my god phr parodsen ,,. ab toh parodsen k gharo m jhakna chordh dain hahahahahahahha buri adat hai balke adhar odhar bhi jhakna shi nahi
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By:
haeeeb,
karachi
on
Jul, 03 2012
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khayal keieye akser khoob soorat ankhe hi dhoka deti hain................
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
on
Jul, 02 2012
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hahahah very good par ye kia last main sara masla karab ker deya
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By:
WASHMA KHAN,
MOSCOW
on
Jul, 02 2012
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