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hmmmmm Nice...
ati jarahi hai behtri rafta rafta ap ki poetry mein iss shair ko ghazal krlen tau buhat achhi mukamal ghazal takhleeq ho sakti hai koshish krti rahain dil se mukhlis ho kr
God Bless You
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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Jun, 03 2012
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mubarak hon aap ko love ho gaya ab too muje tang nahi kero ge na par ek tarfa se kia hota hain yara jab taak dusra left na kare very bad aur female kud first kahe meri nazer main bout karab baat hain acha bold hona hmmm pier teehk ab love hogaya busy raho muje tang na kerna ok good job
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By:
washma khan,
moscow
on
Jun, 03 2012
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Aap acha likhti hein jaise acha likhti hein
issi tarah sab doston ki sache dil se hosla
afzai karein, hum sab mil jul ke rehein
tou zindgi kitni khushgwar ho jaaye
bachon ki tarah aik doosre pe tanz na
karein live and let live agar meri koi
baat achi na lage tou nazar andaz
kar dena waise bhi meri padosan
muje pagal kehti hai.......aap
ne kitabon ke naam pooche hein
meri total DUS kitabein hein
9 shayari ki aur aik ISLAMI
kuch naam likh daita hoon
Darde e judai....Darde e ashnaai
Chamchoon se keh dou loton
se keh dou.......Agar usay khat
likhon tou kya likhon baaqi aainda
Asghar
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By:
Asghar,
Birmingham
on
Jun, 02 2012
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aap ko kia taklef hain main kisi ko bhi commtt do aap ko problem kia hain main too female ko bhi deti hon aap ki tahra surf male ko nahi ok bela waja tention kue leti hon mera aap ko ful permision hain aap jis ko dewana bana le bet laga le ya jo bhi plz mera dahamg na kae
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By:
WASHMA KHAN,
MOSCOW
on
Jun, 02 2012
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