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and miss areej manzoor sahiba app ki himat kese hui mujhe bechari kehne ki khud to badnaam ho aur dosron ki bataon ke bech bolna khtam kar do q ke ye to app ko pata hi hai jab 2 baat kar rahe ho to tessre ko shetaan kaha jata hai so please miss areej mind your language okay
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By:
sumera ataria,
GUDDU
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Aug, 31 2012
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sorry nawaz sahab mujhe nahi pata tha k app itna gussa karen gen lekin i am so sorry pehli baat ke mene kabhi bhi app ki poetry par galat comments nahi diye
app ki poetry achi hi hoti hain and dosri baat mein kisi se jealous nahi hoti
and sorry 4 late reply and please 4give me
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By:
sumera ataria,
GUDDU
on
Aug, 31 2012
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NAWAZ SAHIB YOU WRITE SO SO WELL.I LOVE IT.
SHYRI KAMAL KI KI HAI.yOU hAVE NICE THEMES
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By:
nudrat gul,
lahore
on
Jun, 19 2012
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thnx asghar bhai that u spare some moments from ur precious time..yes brother it should be the rule of life...many things become easy and tensionless by ignoring wrong people and wrong ideas...life become beautiful..
i read ur poetries...u r no doubt doing well ....i appreciate that u not break your link with urdu while living in europe...my field is also not relvent to literature coz i am professionally engineering and in my all career there are calculus and machinery...but i never break my link with urdu and other languages...i like literature either it is in urdu or some other language....book reading and general knowledge is my hobby from childhood and i like people with vast thinkings...being a muslim,islam is my ishq ...but i studied about almost all religions ... baqi apka khaloos hai keh u think me like that...allah apko mazeed taraqqi day...to live abroad is too difficult...i have only one brother and he is also in canada since many years so i know how it is difficult to live so far from parents and bothers sisters...stay blessed always..best wishes...aur haan apki padosan boht naughty hai...achha likhtay ho aap ..light and humourous...
zindgi zinda dili ka naam hai
murda dil kya khak jiya kertay hain....kisi poet ka ye sher for your so fresh and cedar poetry..duaon main yad rakhiyay ga.
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 15 2012
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ISS PE YAAD AYA AIK PURANA QUISSA,PHIR SAHI
KHUSH RAHAIN JEE
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By:
bint e ali,
lahore
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Jun, 11 2012
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too deep
very touching
umda tarz pe likhi itnehai meaari poetry,good nawaz bhai
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By:
akhtar mirza,
karachi
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Jun, 11 2012
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What a class poetry and wooooow kya answer diya apnay .You know alot.Aap say learn kerna chahiyay.i like it
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By:
khalid khan,
peshawar
on
Jun, 09 2012
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fazee, Lahore
shayad aap ko puri baat ka pahta nahi hain muje areej ny khah hain k aap ny nawaz sahib ko kue commt deye uss le main ny socha shayad ye nawaz sahib ki PA HAIN SHAYAD YAHA US FORUM MAIN KOE NAYA RULLES NEKLA HAIN AUR WASE BHI US PAGEL AREEJ NY MUJE HAR JAGA TANG KEYA HAIN SURF MAIN ASGER SAHIB KO AUR NAWAZ SAHIB KO KUE COMMTT DETI HON AGER AAP KO YAHKEEN NA AAE TOO DEHK SAKTI HAIN ASGER SHAIN K AUR MERI POETRY MAE USSKAY COMMTT USS K ELAWA USNAY MUJE HUMARRI WEB MAIN ID MAIN GHALAT KISSAM KI BBAATE LEEKI HAIN
YE MOHTARAMA KO ALLAH JANY KIS BAAT KI TAKLEEF HAIN MUJE 8 MIONTH HOE HAIN AAJ THAK KISI NY ITNA TANG NAHI KEYA HO GA JITNA USS KAHTOON NY KEYA HAIN
YE FORUM MAIN SAB DOST HAIN KOE KISI K SAAT ZABER DASTI NAHI HAIN
AUR AGER MAIN NY NAWAZ SAHIB SE COMPLAIN KI HAIN TOO TEEHK KI HAIN WO MARDO KI ZABAN ZAHDA SAMJTI HAIN
YAHA MARI RAIZ HAI BEST AF HAIN MARIYAM HAIN KABI HUMRI AISE KOE BAAT NAHI HOE KISI CHEES PAR NA JANY KAH SE YE MATEL AAH GE HAIN YAHA SORRY AB PIER MASTI SHURO HO GE HAIN
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By:
washma khan,
moscow
on
Jun, 09 2012
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Nawaz bhai aaj mere paas kaafi waqat tha tou mein ne bauht
se logon ke khyalaat padeh magar mein aap ki Urdu adab,
Islam,Taswaf ki maaloomaat se kaafi mutaasr hua aur
saath aap se kaafi baatein seekhne ko milein jaisa ke
aap ne kaha bure logon ko nazar andaz karna chaaiye
mein iss ke baraks karta raha jis se meri shayari kaafi
mutaasr hui shaaid unn lougon ka maqsad he yehi
tha ...........Asghar
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By:
M.ASGHAR MIRPURI,
BIRMINGHAM
on
Jun, 09 2012
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I am sorry.PLZZZ.i will not disturb again .Bohat acha jawab diya iss ataria becharia ko.but ye Vashma ko bi samjain .phir Sorry sorry sorry
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By:
areej manzoor,
lhr
on
Jun, 07 2012
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@washma, moscow
MUHTARMA WASHMA SAHEBA AAP TU ACHHI KHASI SENSABLE MALUM HOTI HAIN LEKIN SISTER NWAZ SAHIB SE MS. AREEJ KA GILA KRNA QAREEN E INSAF NAHI AAPKO CHAHYE DIRECT MS AREEJ KO APNE ANDAZ MEIN SAMJHANEW KI KOSHISH KAREN UNHON NE JO KUCH MUHTRAM NAWAZ SAHEB YA UZMA SAHEBA K BARE MEIN KAHA YE UNKI SOCH HAI KISI KA BHI IS SAY KOE LINK NAHI WO MADAM TAU SHYD BNA KUCH SCHE SMJHE HE KISI NA KISI KA PICHHA LELETI HAIN Q YE TAU WO HI JANAIN AAP UNKI WJA SE KISI AUR SE GILA KRNE KI MAJAZ KESAIH SAKTI HAIN SMJHA KAREN NAWAZ SAHEB MAYARI SHAIRI MEIN TOP PE HAIN AAP KO KHUD BHI ANDAZA HAI BAKHUBI K NAWAZ SB. JESI POETRY HR KOE NAHI KRTA BHALE HE QUANTITY MEIN 1ST 2ND 3RD NO. PE HON YA TOP 10 MOZUAT O MAYAR K LEHAZ SE KOE IN KA HMPALLA NAHI HAQIQAT HAI
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By:
fazee,
Lahore
on
Jun, 05 2012
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Thnx fatima ahmad...always nice to see your comments.
ab itna bi magic nhin hai dear... waisay ala din ka chiraagh hath lag jai to sab se pehlay ussay kosa order diya jai??/i think bas yehi order kafi ho ga keh kuchh logon ko hmariweb se out kerwa day...ain nawazish ho gi..
iss pe jin kin logon ko pakray ga?? i think they all know their own names
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 05 2012
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thnx maria sister.....yes i think it should be sent in sad but is delivered in romantic...khair koi baat nhin...waisay hmari aik aor little sister ne to issay relious bi bana diya hai.... so unn se bi soory if she get hurt by this poetry...khush rahain hmesha
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 05 2012
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thnx Uzma for liking and so nice comments.Your comments arwe honour for me..
now a days diiferent type of ppl come in hamariweb like areej with their so called poetry who are hitting others personally .i dont want to reply such comments by them coz i feel awkward to reply such cheap remarks..allah se dua hai keh in sab ko hidayat de ameen
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 05 2012
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thnx washma for liking and appreciation..nice to see you..plz dont care areej..she is innocent stupid..poetry cannot be bound...it is the way of expression so take it as poetry and not personalise it in any shape....keep smiling always
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 05 2012
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thnx siddiqui sahb ....your cmnts are always honour for me..khush rhain hmesha
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 05 2012
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and also respected sumera ataria sahiba plz read following verses and give your valued remarks
zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main gaith ker
ya woh jaga bata de jahan per khuda na ho....................by dagh dehlvi
Bazeecha e atfaal hai duniya mere agay
hota hai shab o roz tamasha mere agay
ik khail hai aurang e suleman mere nazdeek
ik baat hai ejaaz e masiha mere agay
imaan mujhay rokay hai to khenchay hai mujhay kufr
kaaba mere peechhay hai kaleesa mere agay.................................by ghalib
hum aisay ahl e nazar ko qabool e haq ke liyay
agar rasool na atay to subho kafi thi.......................................by josh malih abadi
takhleeq e kainaat ke dilchasp jurm per
hansta to ho ga aap bi yazdaan kabi kabi..............................by saghir siddiqui
aao ik sajda kerain alam e madhoshi main
log kehtay hain keh saghar ko khuda yaad nhin...................by saghir siddiqui
zindgi se lipat rha hoon abhi
maot kya hai meri bala janay
ab to araam se guzarti hai
aqbat ki khabar khuda janay.......................................by hafeez jalandhri
Hazoor e haq ye israfeel ne meri shikayat ki
ye banda waqt se pehlay qyamat ker na de barpa.................... Iqbal
kabhi hum se kabhi ghairon se shanasai hai
baat kernay ki nhin tu bi to harjai hai............................Iqbal in shikwa
mataa e bebaha hay soz o dard o arzumandi
muqaam e bandgi de ker na loon shaan e khudawandi
tere azaad bandon ki na ye duniya na wo duniya
yahan marnay ki pabandi wahan jeenay ki pabandi............................. iqbal
faragh tu na baithay ga mahshar mein junoon mera
ya apna garaiban chak ya Daman-e-Yazdan chak...........................Iqbal
except from these few examples of high level of poetry you can study the history of tasawwaf
there are two ideologies in tasawwaf.....wahdat ul wajood & wahdat ushahood
in wahdat ul wajood we see hz hasan basri,hz junaid baghdadi,hz bayzid bastami.hz abubakar shibli,Masoor bin hallaj,imam ghazali,molana roomi,saadi,jami,hz. ali hajveri,hz moeenuddin chishti (these are only few examples)
In wahdat ashahood we see Hz imam ibe timia,imama siyooti,Hz mujaddad alaf sani,shah wali ullah,syed ahmad shaheed,sghah ismail shaheed,iqbal etc
They are opposit in idiology but not said to be kufr by anyone of them.....for detail ,you shd study in detail the history of islam and tasawwaf..........mufti kehlwanay se pehlay get lot of knowledge about basis..... without thinking or without basic knowledge or without sence of understanding,never try to give this big remark to anyone......pehlay hi mharay haan iss tarah ki tensions boht hain...as ashfaaq ahmad said...logon main asaniyan bantain bajai uljhnain bantnay ke..
aor akhir main bahadur shah zafar ke ye sher bi yaad rakhain
na thi haal ki jab hmain apnay khabar,rhay dekhtay aoron ke aib o hunar
pari apni buraiyon pe jo nazar to nagah main koi bura na raha
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 05 2012
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uzma ki kisi se koe laRae nahi koer kuch kehta rahe uzma ko perwa nahi wo tau bs apni rah pe chalti hai sb drguzar krti hue hr insan jo bhi kehta hai apne ya kisi k bare mein apni soch apni rasae apni zehniat k mutabiq he kehta hai i dont know uzmabhi issue bn gae khamakha
Sir AAp bhi esi baton ki tention na lya karen kehne wale aap he khamosh hojaenge jb koe response nahi paenge thats it
poety pr comment ki hd tk tau bt theek hai is mein light magar tameez k daere mein ehte hie hlka phulka mazah bhi chaltA hai kbhi kbhi magar istarah se rabte miladena Not Good not fair
jo aap k krne ka kam hai bs wo kren... chooRen sb k apne haal pe jb kisi ko aap apni rwa na ho tau koe q apna dil jalata phiray what is this rubbish LaRae ...bs dukh hota hai educated persons ki soch pe
Allah Bless we All
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
on
Jun, 04 2012
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mohtarma sumera ataria....
when iqbal wrote his ghazal
tere ishq ki inteha chahta hoon
meri sadgi dekh kya chahta hoon
zara za to dil hun magar shoq itna
wohi lan tarani suna chahta hoon
ye jannat mubarak rhay zahidon ko
keh main bas tera samna chahta hun
bhari bazm main raz ki baat keh di
bara be adab hun,saza chahta hoon
........ya phir when he said in shikwa
baat kehnay ki nhin tu bhi to harjai hai.....
ya phir in one sher he said
ussay subh e azal inkar ki jurrat hui kiyonkar
mujhay maloom kya?wo razdaan tera hai ya mera
.......... there are so many examples like this in his poetry if u get time then try to read iqbal in detail and also read his poem: IBLEES KI MAJLAS E SHOORA"
it is our cultural attitude that we blindly say something kufria without going in depth...if u read that misra in deep to there is written nadaan hoon...so i m searching..jaisay iqbal ne kaha meri sadgi dekh..
agar doosri sence yani wahdat ulwajood ki sence main dekha jai to khuda is present in every thing...diamonds,rubies,pearls.sapphires etc all stones are the signs of khuda....u can search allh in flowers too,in colours too and in yourself too.....hope you understand now..hmaray haan sab ko mufti bannay ka boht shoq hai...halanke mufti banna sab se mushkil kaam hai...kabi time ho to life of imam abu hanifa,hz imam malik.hz imam shaafi ,hz imam humbal ya hz imam ibn e timia ko study kerain and then look where you stand...plz dont mind and think positively..no one can say something kufria without logic...aor bi detail chahiyay ho to plz inform...waisay ibn e insha said truely that....hum logon ko islam main dakhil kam aor kharij zyada kertay hain" god bless you always
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 04 2012
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it is too nice.romantic bhi aor sad bhi.plz likhtay rehna.dont take tension of any kind.you are nice writer,sorry if i ever say wrong.Plzzzzzzzzzz reply my mail
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By:
zoya hashmi,
ke med univ lhr
on
Jun, 04 2012
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