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| ہو گئے ہیں غموں سے آگاہ تیری جدائی کے بعد |
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Thanks Shabeeb Bahi sorry for replying little bit late due to my preoccupation in office at closing of fiscal year 2013......thanks for the nice comments once again.....be happy and stay save.....
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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Jun, 18 2013
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| محبت کانچ کی گڑیا کی مانند |
s.k roop
thanks.....
m,masood
uk
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By:
Mohammed Masood,
Azad Jamu Kashmir
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Jun, 17 2013
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| محبت کانچ کی گڑیا کی مانند |
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wah kya bat hy masood bhai y nazm maine kahen parhi the nd mary dary m bhi note ki the but adhori the aj pori nazm parhi boht ki la jawab likha ap ne khush rahy
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By:
s.k roop,
kirachi
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Jun, 17 2013
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| آتش عشق میں بڑی دیر تک جلایا خود کو |
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boht khoob shabeb bhai taref k liy alfaz nhe hn v nice nd deeppp...
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By:
s.k roop,
kirachi
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Jun, 17 2013
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| ہو گئے ہیں غموں سے آگاہ تیری جدائی کے بعد |
Jamil Bhai ..
Very Nice sad poetry.. with very good expressions ...
Really I like your way of writing in deepth ...
Dil ki halat bahut khobsorti say biyan kr de hai ..
lot of daad k fresh flowers ap k nazr kart hoon..
Be Happy always with Great Smile
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
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Jun, 17 2013
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| Har Bate Ko Warse M Maan Ka Muqadar Milta Hy |
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yes ur ri8 bro maan jaise hasti dunyan m or kahan hy khuda sab ki maon k say humare saron pa salamat rakhe thnx for coment khush rahy...
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By:
s.k roop,
kirachi
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Jun, 17 2013
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| ٹوٹی قبروں کو پھر سے وہ سجانے نکلے |
Thanks Ms. Rizwana ...
For your very nice comments ..
you always encourge my poetry in very nice way ..
Be Happy always with Great Smile
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
on
Jun, 17 2013
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| ٹوٹی قبروں کو پھر سے وہ سجانے نکلے |
Thanks Iman...
For your comments and liking ...
Be Happy always with Great Smile
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
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Jun, 17 2013
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| کیا بھروسہ ہے زندگانی کا |
kia bharosa hai zindagani ka
admi bulbulla hai pani ka
khul gaya sub pay haal e ghem mera
faida kia tha raaz daani ka
wahh wahhh wahhh
bohat khoob Azra kia kehnay
jazbaat main doob kar likhi gai tehreer hai
alfaz apni poori sachai kay sath khulay paray
daad hazir hai
Allah asaaniaan paida farmay
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By:
azharm,
Rawalpindi
on
Jun, 17 2013
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| اداس مت ھونا |
main yehi kahin teray pas hun
wahhh bohat khoob Sunder G
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By:
azharm,
Rawalpindi
on
Jun, 17 2013
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