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Koe bt nhe uzma ap kuch b likh dy but likh dia kren thanx :-)
Thankx Haseeb bhai 4 liking. Always b happy.. Ap urdu f0nt me post kiya karen plz. Ap wirte bht acha krty hen. I like ur last 2 poetries.:-)
Yeh mene tashbee dyne ki kh0sh ki ti but i thnk sai tashbee nhe hoe. But mje sai lage ti. Anyhow thankx 4 ur very very nice c0ments. Thankx again. Pasnd krny par. Always b happy.me brfabi ki jaga kuch or add kruge thankx again ap ne bta dia.thankx alot m.nawaz.
Thankx two othr person Muhamad Zubair & and Prof.AKbr. Always b happy.
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
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Jul, 22 2012
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..........so nice..........
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By:
Muhammad Zubair,
Multan
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Jul, 22 2012
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barfabi yaani snowfalling aur wo bhi lubhati hui barfbari aur betaabi .... tashbeeh main thori si garbar lag rhi hai...anyway nice poetry .2nd sher is very nice n simple.....khush rahain muskurati rahain.
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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Jul, 21 2012
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great maria......
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By:
haseeb khan,
karachi
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Jul, 20 2012
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oh sorry Shab bhar teri Yad not (tad) its just typing mistake
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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Jul, 20 2012
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Oh thanku v much uzma ap ne hamari itni tarif krdi mene is ko puri krna ha abi. Ap mujhe hamsha he asy daad dyti raha karen ap k himat bharany sy h0sla bht bhar jata ha aur me khushe k mary kuch kahti b nhe hu jb ap k c0ments read krti hu. Keep in touch. Takecare
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By:
Maria.Ghouri,
Hnbd
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Jul, 20 2012
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Good mariyaaaaaaaaaa madam. Ma toh ya web aapke poetry kay intazar ma open karta ho. Pls ub koyi love poem bhi leekh do. . . .
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By:
Prof.AKBAR,
Jhang
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Jul, 20 2012
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shb bhr teri tad shore machaey rakhti hai
esai rulati hai mere tootay dil ko bekhuabi
Hmmmmmmmm
buhat Khoob
Veri Nice
keep it up more
Dear
GoodLuck
khush rahain
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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Jul, 19 2012
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