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zara...sara...maha...achhe naam hain
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By:
Hashim,
Jaipur (india)
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Jul, 17 2012
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Thanks Shabbir Bhae.........
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By:
Naveed Ahmed Shakir,
Multan
on
Jun, 14 2011
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khoob bohat khoob
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By:
sara,
Multan
on
May, 29 2011
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Thank you very much for your nice comments......
Be Happy......
Naveed Ahmed Shakir
Multan
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By:
Naveed Ahmed Shakir,
Multan
on
May, 16 2011
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nice ghazal
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By:
Zara,
SialKot
on
May, 16 2011
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KHOOB BOHAT KHOOB.
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By:
Tanveer Leghari,
Khan Garrh
on
May, 16 2011
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nice.................very nice...........................
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By:
Ameer Khan,
DG Khan
on
May, 16 2011
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Excellent words in the form of poetry.
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By:
Maha Shah,
Multan
on
May, 16 2011
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nice poetry.
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By:
Shazia,
Shaikhupura
on
May, 16 2011
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Nice words. Dear I like your poetry which is showing genuine feeling of man in different situation.....
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By:
Abdullah,
Lahore
on
May, 16 2011
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good keep it up Shakir
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By:
Nadia Butt,
Pakistan
on
May, 16 2011
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بہت اچھا ھے آپ کا کلام۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔کوشش کریں کہ اس میں اور بھی بہتری آئے۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔خوش رہو۔
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By:
Sweet Pari,
Dil
on
May, 16 2011
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Achi Koshesh hey. asi tarah likhtay rahoo.
M.Sharif
Faisalabad
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By:
Sharif,
Faisalabad
on
May, 16 2011
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nice poetry.............................
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By:
Amin,
Faisalabad
on
May, 15 2011
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Very Nice poetry
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By:
Sajjadchandio,
Bahawalpur
on
May, 08 2011
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nice
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By:
Madiha,
Pakistan
on
May, 06 2011
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خوب بہت خوب لکھا ہے آپ نے،بس اسی طرح لکھتے رہو۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔
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By:
Ghazi,
RY Khan
on
May, 06 2011
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Nice poetry Shakir bhae. as tarah lagay rahoo.
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By:
wali,
Faisalabad
on
May, 05 2011
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nice poetry
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By:
kamran,
Sargodha
on
May, 02 2011
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Nice
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By:
Ashfaq Pasina,
Faisalabad
on
Apr, 23 2011
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