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very very perfact sher..
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By:
Asif Yasin,
Lahore
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Jan, 20 2013
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Maa ya pheli Eid zindgi ki jo tery bin ghuzari hum ne -- kheny tu Eid thi magar teri bate yad ker ke ROTA raha
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By:
Sh.Afzaal Ahmad,
Faisalabad
on
Sep, 01 2011
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nice sher
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By:
Eman,
Faisalabad
on
Jul, 07 2011
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nice sher.......
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By:
Saima,
Faisalabad
on
May, 25 2011
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bouht khoob...Dunia me muji jo be mila hai jitna be mila hai ya su kuch meri Maa ki dewaio ka sila hai
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By:
Sh.Afzaal Ahmad,
faisalabad
on
May, 23 2011
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nice words for mother.
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By:
Dya,
Quetta
on
May, 16 2011
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Thank you very much for your comments
Be Happy
Naveed Ahmed Shakir
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By:
Naveed Ahmed Shakir,
Multan
on
May, 16 2011
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nice
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By:
Zara,
SialKot
on
May, 16 2011
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KHOOB BOHAT KHOOB.
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By:
Tanveer Leghari,
Khan Garrh
on
May, 16 2011
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nice.................very nice...........................
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By:
Ameer Khan,
DG Khan
on
May, 16 2011
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Excellent words in the form of poetry.
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By:
Maha Shah,
Multan
on
May, 16 2011
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nice poetry.
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By:
Shazia,
Shaikhupura
on
May, 16 2011
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Nice words. Dear I like your poetry which is showing genuine feeling of man in different situation.....
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By:
Abdullah,
Lahore
on
May, 16 2011
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good keep it up Shakir
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By:
Nadia Butt,
Pakistan
on
May, 16 2011
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| بہت اچھا ھے آپ کا کلام۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔کوشش کریں کہ اس میں اور بھی بہتری آئے۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔خوش رہو۔ |
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By:
Sweet Pari,
Dil
on
May, 16 2011
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Achi Koshesh hey. asi tarah likhtay rahoo.
M.Sharif
Faisalabad
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By:
Sharif,
Faisalabad
on
May, 16 2011
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nice poetry
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By:
Amin,
Faisalabad
on
May, 16 2011
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Very Nice poetry
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By:
Sajjadchandio,
Bahawalpur
on
May, 08 2011
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خوب بہت خوب لکھا ہے آپ نے،بس اسی طرح لکھتے رہو۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔
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By:
Ghazi,
RY Khan
on
May, 06 2011
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Nice poetry Shakir bhae. as tarah lagay rahoo.
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By:
wali,
Faisalabad
on
May, 05 2011
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