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very ordinary lines.... whats so great about it.....
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By:
Amaan JAved ,
delhi
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May, 28 2013
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hum apni poetry kese bhej sakhte hai plz help me ?
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By:
shaista,
guddu
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Dec, 27 2011
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Bht ache
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By:
M.saeed,
Swl
on
Nov, 29 2011
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DEAR, VERY NICE POET YOU ARE.
KEEP YOUR MOMENTUM UP...
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By:
azhar,
UK Glasgow
on
Nov, 05 2010
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Dear Kinza Assalamu alekum,
ap bhout achchi shair hain MashAllah bhout khoob bayan kiya ahi apne apne alfazoo me "Ahsas" ko............... Lekin my dear Ahsas hamesha bura nhi hota achcha waqt sunhaere lamahat Ahsas ka ek alag pehloo hin...................
Unke aane ka jo pegam sab laii hain,
Mere dil ki her ek kali muskuraii hain,
Unki ankho mein mene apni tasweer paii hain,
Main shrma gaii !!!!!!!!!! hay mein shrma gaii,
Jab apne saaye me unki perchaii paii huii....... :)
Apke jawab ki muntakib
Seema Abbas Yani
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By:
seema,
Moradabad (India)
on
Oct, 27 2010
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nice keep it up
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By:
kuki,
isb
on
Oct, 09 2010
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ya bohat achi hai
ap aise hi liktay raho
thats good
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By:
hina,
karachi
on
Sep, 16 2009
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very nice,really,
main ny apki poetry aaj parhi hai,keep it up.
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By:
Shabana,
china
on
Jul, 02 2009
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| اس میں کچھ کمی ہے مزید اچھا کرنے کی ضرورت ہے۔ |
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By:
M. Aumir,
Chichawatni Sahiwal
on
Jan, 05 2009
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boht khobsort
ache share he hemasha dil ko chote ha or ap ke share dil ko cho lane wale ha. marbolus
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By:
zeeshan tufail,
quetta
on
Aug, 17 2008
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Nice
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By:
abbas,
karachi
on
Jun, 14 2008
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agar ap es shair ko urdu main likhteen too behtar tha.nice
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By:
arslan,
quetta
on
Jun, 05 2008
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sir kia hi baat hai bhut khoob
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By:
Danish Ali,
karachi
on
May, 28 2008
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ap ki poetry bohat achi he , ap ne ahsas ko achi tarah defind kya he. ap mohsan naqvi prha kro
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By:
ahmad,
punjabian, lahore
on
May, 17 2008
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dear ur poetry is soo soo nice i think u hide a greast poet in ur inner side plz show that i pray for God u prove ur self
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By:
Asher ,
Lahore
on
May, 13 2008
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Very Very Nice.
Like that
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By:
Jawad Saleem,
Lahore
on
May, 06 2008
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Kya Sheikh Ki Khushk Zindagani
Guzri
Bechaari Ki Ek Shab Na Suhaani Guzri
Dozak K Takhayyul Mein Burhaapa Guzra
Janat Ki Duaaoo Mein Jawaani Guzri
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By:
Mahil Rizvi,
Lahore
on
Apr, 25 2008
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Hum To Muhabat Main Toheed Ke Kail Hain Faraz
Aik Hi Shaks Ko Mehboob Banaye Rakha
awesome peotry
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By:
ali,
hyderabad
on
Apr, 15 2008
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Salam, Good effort Keep the ball rolling..
bus kuch Lafzoon ki Hair Phair ki Zarurat hai..
But great effort..!!!!
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By:
FARAZ,
Karachi
on
Apr, 10 2008
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| اچھی نظم ہے بئی واہ کیا کہنا! |
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By:
shabbir nazish,
karachi
on
Apr, 06 2008
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