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| اپنے ہوش میں رہتا ہوں میں |
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My dear Shabeeb Bahi it is my great pleasure to see you on my page with so nice and commendable appreciations.......I know the hardships of our nationals in Middle East especially to contact here in the country due to internet problems........anyway thank you for appraising my poetry.........stay save and happy with your family.........
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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Jun, 17 2013
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| اپنے ہوش میں رہتا ہوں میں |
Wah Jamil bhai ...
Very nice poetry ... with good expression..
Sorry for delay and short comments in these days
we are geting problem in net in our area..
Be Happy always with Great SMile
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
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Jun, 17 2013
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| اپنے ہوش میں رہتا ہوں میں |
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I am so glad to see you on my page after long pause....Thanks for kind comments Sarwar Bhai......
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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Jun, 16 2013
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| اپنے ہوش میں رہتا ہوں میں |
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It is your kindness Kazimi Bhai.........be happy..........
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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Jun, 16 2013
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| اپنے ہوش میں رہتا ہوں میں |
Kya Kehney Hain Jamil Bhai,
Dhaer Saari Daad Qabool kijiye.
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By:
Sarwar Farhan Sarwar,
Karachi
on
Jun, 16 2013
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| زِندگِی تُجھ سے ہمیں |
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wah, wa. buhat khoob
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By:
Anwar Kazimi,
mississauga, Canada
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Jun, 16 2013
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| خود سے ناراض ، زمانے سے خفا رہتے ہیں |
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Only one simple word ' excellent'
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By:
Anwar Kazimi,
mississauga, Canada
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Jun, 16 2013
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| یا رب کبھی مجھے وہ منظر دکھائی دے |
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I liked your poetry, you are among those who know the technical aspects of Urdu poetry, and you have nice way to express your feelings, well done, keep it up. I highly appreciate your work
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By:
Anwar Kazimi,
mississauga, Canada
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Jun, 16 2013
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| اپنے ہوش میں رہتا ہوں میں |
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nice poetry Jamil saheb, keep it up
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By:
Anwar Kazimi,
mississauga, Canada
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Jun, 16 2013
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| چوڑیوں اور خواھشوں میں |
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well said
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By:
Najma Bashir,
Bhakkar
on
Jun, 15 2013
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