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bohet khoob, maslsal ke taqrar nae jan dal de hain kalam main, bohet aaalla
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By:
rizwana,
Toronto
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Jun, 18 2013
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bohet navazish shabeeb, ap nae apni musroorf zindgi sae vaqet niqal ker mujh nacheez ke poetry ko itnay pyaray comments sae navaza, jettay rahae or khobsorat kalam liktay rahae..
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By:
rizwana,
toronto
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Jun, 17 2013
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Very Good Ms. Rizwana..
Nice khati methi like truti fruti ... poetry ..
you write so good with nice words..
Be Happy always with Great Smile
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
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Jun, 17 2013
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| میری بڈی کول جدوں بیندی اے |
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sukria nadeem, jettay rahey or pyrra or vadeyya klam liktay rahay
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By:
rizwana,
toronto
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Jun, 16 2013
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| میری بڈی کول جدوں بیندی اے |
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bohet sukria sarwar, khush rahey or apnay rang e zrafet sae sub ko navaztae rahey
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By:
rizwana,
toronto
on
Jun, 16 2013
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bohet sukria sawar, mazzah or mubalgha arraie or ye caracter young babba hain lol , or hmray babay vaqaeee bohet naik or pur khloos hotay hain ye babba g b bohet naik or pur khloos hain ma!!!!! tovajh or dad ka bohet bohet sukria:)
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By:
rizwana,
toronto
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Jun, 16 2013
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| رنگین بابے |
Wah Rizwana Sahiba,
Bohat Umda Kalam hai.
Wesey Wo Western Babey Ho'n Ge, Hamarey Haan bhi Rangeen Babey hotey hai'n mager Nisbatan Kam, Ziyada ter tu Black & White Babey hotey hain, Jin ki Pur Khaloos Dua'en Hamari Zindagiyo'n ko Rangeen Bana Deti hain.
Dhaer Saari Daad Qabool kijiye.
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By:
Sarwar Farhan Sarwar,
Karachi
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Jun, 16 2013
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| میری بڈی کول جدوں بیندی اے |
Wah Ji Wah, Rizwana Sahiba
Ki Keh Ditta Ji Tusi, Wah
Kamal e Ker Ditta
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By:
Sarwar Farhan Sarwar,
Karachi
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Jun, 16 2013
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| تیری میری، میری تیری لائٹ آنی ہے مُشکل۔۔۔ |
Nadeem Bhai,
Hum Der Asl Qaed-e Begum me Thay k Baqol Chacha Ghalib,
"HUM WAHA'N HAIN JAHA'N SE HUM KO BHI, KUCH HAMARI KHABER NAHI AATI"
Ab aap se kiya Chupana K Hum aaj kal Bertan Dhoney ki Training Le Rahey hain :-D
Rahi Baat Load Shedding Ki tu Allah Karey k Watan-e Aziz ka Ye Masla Jald Az Jald Solve Ho Ja'ey. Wesey Manfi Do Derja Hararat ka Sun Ker Germi k Saarey Hamley Manfi Ho Ga'ey. Allah aap ko aur Tamam Dosto'n ko Apni Hifz wo Aman me Rakhey. (Amen)
Ab Insha Allah Baqa'edgi se Mulaqat hua Karey Gi.
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By:
Sarwar Farhan Sarwar,
Karachi
on
Jun, 16 2013
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shuker hain ap hmari web pay nazer aye,i miss ur comments n miss ur great poetry too,any ow thanku v much, jettey raho..
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By:
rizwana,
toronto
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Jun, 16 2013
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