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tnx , aap b khush rahain
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By:
asim khan,
Islamabad
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May, 16 2013
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| ہاں تم |
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ap ki poetry waqai bare hosla baksh shayri he,is web site pe ye nazm dekhne ko mile,ye is se phale nazer se nahe guzre.waooooo
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By:
syedasaimausman,
karachi
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May, 16 2013
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| ہمیں ان کو کچھ کہنا نہیں آتا |
wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
asghar
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By:
asghar,
birmingham
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May, 11 2013
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| ہمیں ان کو کچھ کہنا نہیں آتا |
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hashmi bhae buhata chi thought.or buhata ch kalam likha ap nay ap hamesha he buhat acha likhty ha.well done
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By:
Ayesha khan,
D,pakistan
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May, 10 2013
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| ہمیں ان کو کچھ کہنا نہیں آتا |
Very Very nice jamil bhai...kya khoobsoorat batain
keh jatay hain aap chupke chupke....real poetic thoughts...
always fresh breezes seem to come from ur words with
all fragrances of devotions...
Nice to read such a cute poetry,,,,
best regards with best wishes
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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May, 09 2013
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| ہمیں ان کو کچھ کہنا نہیں آتا |
Wah Jamil Bhai ..
Kia complaint quote ki hai ..
Bahut achi short poetry ...
Lajawab service bay missal poet...
Daad kabool farmayeen ..
Be Happy always with Great Smile.
Shabeeb Hashmi
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By:
Shabeeb Hashmi,
Al-Khobar
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May, 09 2013
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| ہمیں کوئی بات سمجھانی نہیں آتی |
Azra your beautiful comments with so precious words you always use to appreciate me is welcome and I am thankful to you for your this gesture...... I know the busy life of one Asian House wife especially in Foreign Country is so hard bec I have my family members in UK who always told me the hardships of Pakistanis living abroad......
It is your encouragements that you manage all at one time likewise you literary activities alongwith your work at home...Dont apologize for that its normal but take care of you and your family...God bless you and keep all of you in safe heaven......bye bye....
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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May, 08 2013
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| ہمیں کوئی بات سمجھانی نہیں آتی |
Boaht khoob Jamil
Hasb e mamool bohat umda pairaey main kalam takhliq kia.
Har sher main armanon ki khushboo aur jazbon ki shiddat aur
muhabbat bharey rang wazeah hain.
Barey dinashin aur dilkash andaz mainaap ne apney dil ki baat
bata di hai aur phir bhi keh rahey hain ke aap ko dil ki baat batani
nahin aati?
Arey bhaee aap ne bohat dlruba andaz main dil ki bat ka tazkarah
kia hai.Har sher main bohat taseer aur khoobsurati hai aur sadgi bhi
jo kalam ko aur bhi ziada dilkashi ata karti hai.
Dair se comments ke liye muafi chahti hoon .Kia karoon itni masroofiyat
hoti hai ke basa auqat thorra sa waqt nikalna bhi mushkil ho jata hai laikin
poori kooshish zaroor hoti hai ke aap sub web ke sathion se rabta rahey aur
taza kalam parhney ka mauqa milta rahey.
Daad ke taza gulab
Aur
Duaon ke nazraney
Qabool hon.
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By:
Azra Naz,
Reading UK
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May, 08 2013
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Thank you Shakila Sahiba.......be happpy......
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
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May, 08 2013
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| ہمیں کوئی بات سمجھانی نہیں آتی |
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Thank you so much Arif Sahib.......God bless you......
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By:
Jamil Hashmi,
Rawalpindi
on
May, 08 2013
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