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Shukriya uzma,
fursat sy he ap ne ham par apni nazar ka karam to krdia,
ham b dkh rhy thy ap ki nazar ka abray karam akhr kis din ham na cheez par pary
intazar khtam huwa 4 oct ap ne hamen b tawaja ka nishana bna lia shukriya bht shukriya pasnd krny par. . . . Jeeti rahy,
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By:
Maria,
Hnbd
on
Oct, 05 2012
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verygood
fursat zra km the islye pehle paRhi nahi ja saki unwan pe barha nzr ruki lekin bs moqa he nahi mil saka abi kam se farig ho k kuchh fresh hone ka ji chaha tau hamariwebpage pe "aap k chand ki gawahi nazar i' so
very good baitabuht taraqi karengi aap iss maidan mein q k mukhlis b hain aur mehnti b passion dikhae deta hai poetry writing k lye aap ki poetry paRh k andaza hota hai
shabash isi tarah likhti rahain
khush rahain
GoodLuck
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
on
Oct, 04 2012
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Maza aah gaya good
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By:
Shamil,
Rwp
on
Oct, 02 2012
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bohat bohat zabardast hai yaar...
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By:
waqas,
lahore
on
Oct, 01 2012
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And one person ap apna name wirte kiya kro name shaksiyat ka hussan hota ha name sy bhar kr koi hussan nhe hota. Hope next time ap with name apna tabsara add kro gay. Thankx
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 24 2012
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Shukriya bht bht shukriya one person.
Also thankx 4 bst wishes. Ap b apna khayal rhkiye ga.. Ap b acha likhty ho. Mene kuch poetries parhi hen ap ki. Nice.
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 24 2012
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Thanks to share such a beautiful poetry
Chand par itna acha likha apnay.
No doubt chand say related inti pyari poetry manay first time
Parhi hai.
Chand ko mukhatib our us say batay Karnay ka andaz Buhat hi dilkash hai.
Khush rahain apna Buhat khyal rakhain
Apnay khyalaat our sooch ka isi tharah izhar karti rahain
Take care and have a smile
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By:
Aik Banda,
London
on
Sep, 21 2012
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Thanks Areej. Khush Raho.
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 18 2012
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Thank You Very Much M.nawaz. Ap K Comments Mry Liye Bht Aahimiyat K Haamil hen. QK ap Bht nice aur Sanjida Shayar ho. SANjida Shayar Zoaq B Acha Rhkta Hy. Its Mean Mri Poetry Main Koi To Zoaq O Shoaq hoga jo Ap Ny Itni TariFf Krdi. Ek Bar Phr Shukriya. Khush Rahy. :-)
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 18 2012
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Thanx Sumera Ataria.. KHush Raho
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By:
Maria. Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 17 2012
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Shukriya Af(lucky)...
Khush raho...
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 17 2012
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ACHA LIKHTI HO MARIA.US NE TERA RUKHSAR CHOOM KE KAHA THA?HMMMM
Romanctic hy
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By:
areej manzoor,
lhr
on
Sep, 14 2012
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Thank You so much washma, sana, and shami, b happy both of u.
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 12 2012
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Thankx Akbar Bhai for ur such a nice comments. B happy always duaoon main yaad rahkiye ga. Take care.
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Sep, 12 2012
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GOOD LUCK MARIA...........BUHAT HI NICE POETRY HAI
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
on
Sep, 10 2012
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Hmmmm Nice ................... Best Wishes :)))
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By:
AF(Lucky),
Saudi Arabia
on
Sep, 09 2012
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very nice very nice guriya....aap to boht improved poetry likhti ho ab...good bacha
aik saal ka keh ke gya tha ab 100 years ho gay hain.....to goya aap ki age bani 115 ~ 125 years....to aapka name gunese book of world record main aya ho ya surely.....
chaand se ye sab poochhnay ke liyay APOLO ki flight bhejni paray gi moon pe.....Late Neil Armstrong hotay to unn say poochhtay chaand kya kehta hy.........khair its joke innocent guriya.
chhi poetry hy balkeh boht achhi hy........likhti rahiyay aur khyalaat share krti rahiyay...best wishes
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Sep, 09 2012
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بہت خوب
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By:
وشمہ خان وشمہ,
pakistan
on
Sep, 07 2012
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Very nice!
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By:
Mubeen Nisar,
Islamabad
on
Sep, 07 2012
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N so nice profile pic
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By:
Sana rao,
Lhr
on
Sep, 07 2012
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