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very good.
awsome
greatttttttttt poetry
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By:
beenash ,
karachi
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Jul, 26 2012
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lovely.good poem
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By:
RRAZI,
peshawar
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Jul, 26 2012
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YOU TOO ROMANTIC
SERIOUS BAAT MAIN BI ROMANCE KO SHAMIL KER LETAY HO.I LIKE IT.
MAZA ATA HAY PARNAY KA REALY.
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By:
komal,
sheikhupura
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Jul, 22 2012
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thnx maria....ya mostly dreams are dreams but if we have will in our minds and hearts then destinations have to be achieved...motto should be strong and clear and there should be devotion for it...keep smiling always
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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Jul, 22 2012
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Very nice... But khuwab khuwab he reh jaty hen wo he khuwb haqiqat me dhaltay hen jo fajar time ya tahajad time aey wo khuwb sachy h0ty hen mene b ek khuwb tahajad time dakha tha usy sach h0ty b bht jald dkh lia tha. Anyhow bht he khubsurat likhe ha
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
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Jul, 19 2012
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thnx nadeem murad sahib for liking....yes u r saying true...sitaron,kehkshaon kay is more suitable here and seem better...thnx for suggestion..your commen is really honour for me dear...b happy n keep smiling
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jul, 18 2012
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thnx Af for liking ...nice to see u.best wishes
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jul, 18 2012
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thnx uzma
yes u r saying true...kash ye khwab haqeeqat main dhal jain........dreams are the signs of hope and hope is the biggest gift of god....end of hope main defeat...and hope is the sign of life....we have to struggle to convert these dreams into real.......and that time will come sure inshallah
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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Jul, 17 2012
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thnx sumera ataria for liking...always nice to see ur comments..jeeti raho khush raho..best wishes
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jul, 17 2012
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thnx shabeeb bhai for so nice comment
it is the biggest wish of all people i think to see such envoirnment where all sorrows n terrors vanish totally...this paradise ,this time will come inshallah...b happy always
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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Jul, 17 2012
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Nicee ........
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By:
AF(Lucky),
Saudi Arabia
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Jul, 17 2012
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واہ واہ بہت خوب
بہت اعلیٰ
میں نے یہ نظم کئی بار پڑھی لطف آگیا
ایک مصرے کو درست کر لیجئے
تو نظم میں کوئی بنیادی غلطی نہیں رہے گی ورنہ بہتری کی گنجائش ہمیشہ رہتی ہے۔
کہکشاؤں کے ستاروں کے
اگر یہ اس یوں ہوتا
ستاروں، کہکشاؤں کے
آپ بہت اچھا موضوع شعر کہتے ہیں
آپ کی اصلاح مقصود نہیں، صرف دیہان مبذول کروانا ہے،
اتنی اچھی نظم لکھنے پر مبارکباد قبول کیجئے
آپ کا دوست
ندیم مراد |
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By:
nadeem murad,
umtata,RSA
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Jul, 16 2012
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CHALO KUCH KHWAB BUNTE HAIN ...
KASH K YE KHAB JO LFZON KI ZUBANI BAYAN KIA HAI HR ANKH YE KHAB BUNAI AUR PHR YE KHB HAQEEQAT BN K UBHRAI KHAB NA RAHAI TEHREER KAASAR TABEER DAI JAEY
GOOD THEME GOOD WORK VERY NICE
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By:
UZMA,
Lahore
on
Jul, 16 2012
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wow very nice poetry.......................always b happy
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By:
sumera ataria,
GUDDU
on
Jul, 16 2012
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Dear Nawaz ....... May Mighty Allah accept your wish ..... Ameen
Really beautiful ..... Geo ....
Shabeeb Hashmi
Al-Khobar
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By:
SHABEEB HASHMI,
Al-Khobar KSA
on
Jul, 15 2012
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