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Thek ha sumera sistr nhe chorti. Ap duaon me yad rhkna very nice cmnts. Love u cute si sis
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By:
Maria,
Hnbd
on
Aug, 05 2012
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wow maria nice poetry hai..........mujhe buhat achi lagi ye poetry and app humesha poetry likhti rehna......
kisi ke kehne par poetry likhna kabhi bhi mat choriye ga okay humari duaae app ke sath hain.............b happy
your little sis
sumera ataria
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By:
sumera ataria,
GUDDU
on
Aug, 02 2012
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LoL. TUM MEIN AEK YA HI BAD HABIT HE.TUM GUSSA BUHAT KAHTI HO. BILAVAJA KA HI.
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By:
Ayesha,
Lhr
on
Jul, 22 2012
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Hmmmm Ayesha Madam Sorry to say na me ne ap k kehny par shayari krna shuru ki ti.. And na me ap k kehny par chor sakti hu. Yeh khubsurat jazba hota ha yeh leave nhe hoskta yeh God gft ha aur muje is raah me naam krna ha me is par din rat work krti hu InshahALLAH EK na ek din me mukamal aboor pa lu ge. And ap khush raho geo barahy mehrbani dusaroo ko b jeenay do. Its public place n0w n0 c0mments ok dear. . . . . . . . . . . .
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By:
Maria Ghouri,
Hnbd
on
Jul, 19 2012
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I know u maria u r so inocent grl aur may tumay masooma kahte the may nay tumhara naam bhe masooma rakha tha. Tum shayari chor do maria tumhay may har dafa kahte the ab bhe kahun gi tumhari faith full Ayesha
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By:
Ayesha,
Lhr
on
Jul, 17 2012
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Bohat bohat Shukriya Uzma Jo Ap Hamari Itni Tarif Krti Hen Ham To Samjty hen Ham Is Tarif K LaiQ NHe hen. JB ap Hamari Tarif Krti hen To Hamara Hosala Bht Had Tak Bhar Jata Hai. AP k Pas To Bht hunar Yeh To Bs Ap Hamara Dil Rhkti hen Aur Ap K h0ty Yahan Is Web Main Kon Naam Kama Sakta ha Ap To Bht Ala Darjay Ki Shayara Hen Tarif Kya ap Apni Tarif khud ho. MUJE yaqin Jany Behad Khushi h0ti ha Jb Ap Ham Sy Bat Krti Hain Phr Mehsus h0ta Ha Kuch Na Kuch To Ha Ham Main Jo Ap Hamarhi Tarif Krti hen. AP sada Khush Raho Jo Chaho Wo ap Pao Yeh hamari Dua Ha Ap K Liye. TAKE CARE APny Liye Na Sai Hamarhy Liye.. Aur plz s0ng pakistani ha ya indian s0ng ki pehli line Bta Den Ham Sunana Chahy Gay.
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By:
MARIA RIAZ GHOURI,
Hnbd
on
Jul, 13 2012
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WO AEY HAMARE GHAR MEIN KHUDA KI QUDRAT HAI
KBHI HM UN KO KBI APNE GHR KO DEKHTAI HAI
MARIA DEAR
AAP K PAS MERE SE ZIADA HUNR HAI SHAIRY KA NAHI YAQEEN TAU BS THORA WQT GUZRNE DAI YAQEEN KHUDBAKHUD AA HE JAEYGA SACH MEIN BUHT TALENT HAI AAP K PAS IZHAR O BAYAN KA IS MAIDAN MEIN AAP BUHT NAAM BNAENGI NZR ARAHA HAI SAAF YE AAP KI INKESARI HAI JO AAP KHUD BASALAHYAT HONE K BAWJUD uzma KI ITNI TAREEF KRTI HAIN
BUHT SHUKRIA DEAR
YE MERE EK PASANDIDA SONG KA SHAIR AAP KI NZR
"YE KESAI MUMKIN HAI HM NASHINO'N K DIL KO DIL KI KHBR NA PUHANCAHI
UNHEN BHI HM YAAD ATAI HONGEY K JN KO HM YAAD KR RAHAI HAIN"
DUAON MEIN YAD RAKHYEGA
HAMESHA KHUS RAHIN
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
on
Jul, 12 2012
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Gbht bht shukriya ap ka shabeeb bhai ap ny meri thareer pasnd farmai agr ap ko koi kami lagi ho to bta den me behtr krny ki koshsh karunge ,,,,,,, same to u t,c.............. bht bht shukriya nawaz bhai ap k nice comments ka b happy ........................................ bht bht shukriya haseeb bhai ap k bht pyary comments parh kr khushi hoi ,,,,,,,, b happy always
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By:
MARIA RIAZ GHOURI,
HNBD
on
Jul, 12 2012
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Wo aey hamhary ghar hame aitabar nhe. Kbi ham Unhy daikhty hen kabi apny ghar ko.
Yeh shair ap k liye uzma. Muje ye shair thek sy yad nhe par jesa yad tha ap ko dedc8 krdia. Maksad yeh tha. Ap ny tarif ki hamhri tahreer ki kbi ap ki tarif ko dkhty hen kbi apni tehreer ko. Ap ny c0ments diye hamhri pic pa.. kbi ap k c0mments ko dkhty hen kbi pic ko.
Bri he dair laga di ap ny ham par nazare karam dalty huye.
Shikway hazar hen waqt kam hain chalen ap ki nazare karam hui to sai.
Bht bht Shukriya uzma ap ki tarif krny ka. Ham to ap ko follow kr kr k likhty hen Gazal me Ap sy Behtr is Web main Koi Nhe hay. HAME TO GAZal likhni b nhe ati. RADEef and Qafiye ki kami ho jati ha. PHR b ap ki tarif ka Dil K Akhri geharai sy thnx
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By:
MARIA RIAZ GHOURI ,
Hnbd
on
Jul, 11 2012
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Bahut Khoob Ms. Maria. keep it up ...
Be Happy Always ...
Shabeeb Hashmi
AL-Khobar
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By:
SHABEEB HASHMI,
Al-Khobar KSA
on
Jul, 11 2012
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SO CUTE PIC ON TOP (HOME PAGE)
AND POETRY ALSO VERY VERY NICE
AISE HE LIKHTI RAHAIN KHUSH RAHAI
BUAHT PYARE ANDAZ MEIN BYAN KIA HAI KHUBSURAT KHAYALAT KO DEAR MARIA RIAZ AAP NE
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
on
Jul, 10 2012
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THAMKX AMNA KHAN THNKX SAM THNKX SMART GRL THANKX IMRAN BHAI THNKX AKBR BHAI THANKX BHUHRA AND THNKX FARYAL b appy all of u :-)
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By:
MARIA RIAZ GHOURI,
HNBD
on
Jul, 09 2012
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goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooD Lyk ths way of poetries
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By:
Khalid Rana,
NNorway
on
Jul, 09 2012
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ToO mmmmmUCh nYCe
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By:
Faryal abroo,
sahiwal
on
Jul, 07 2012
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great ...
barbe sister jab pyar mohabbat haad se guzar jaye na toh ishq kehlata hai
aur aap nay is ki achi tareef bayan kardi really .
bohot hosla chayeah in saab k liye warna zindagi le jati hai ye .
maza aa gaya read kr k
regards
haseeeb khan
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By:
Haseeb,
karachi
on
Jul, 07 2012
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very nice poetry with nice ideas..keep it up
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jul, 07 2012
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wow excelnt
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By:
bhushra,
gilgat
on
Jul, 06 2012
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Khoobsurat
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By:
Raza khan,
Sawat
on
Jul, 05 2012
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Good Mariyaaaaaaaaaa
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By:
prof.Akbar,
jhang
on
Jul, 05 2012
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cool duDe
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By:
ImraN,
Lhr
on
Jul, 05 2012
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