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Thank you DearSumera g
for Nice comments
be happy always
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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Jul, 05 2012
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xectly b ilkul sahi shair ka hwala dya hai aap ne Iqbal ki nzm"Ek Arzu" se yehi tha mere zehn meionbl k lashaoor mein arsae draz se panap raha tha jb mein sixth class mein thi tau school k tablo show mein meri dost ne buht khoobsurat awaz mein tarnum k sath paRhi the uswqt se buht pasand hai aur jb 8th mein Urdu ki kitab mein mukamal likhi hue mili tau mujhe buht khushi hue aaj tk buhtpasand hai ye nzm mujhe
aur ghalib ki ye ghzl "dil dhoondta... bi aksar during muasrufiat srgoshi mein gungunati rehti hoon baawaz e blnd tau phr daant ya logo ki nened mein khalal ka drr wesy neend mein tau already WAPDA
mukhil hota rehta hai roz ki bt hai
Thank you kahan se kahan yadon ki wadi mein puhanchadya aap k comments ne
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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Jul, 03 2012
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WOW nice poetry but buhat gehrai hai app ki poetry mein...........................
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
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Jul, 03 2012
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very nice..mashaAllah..chashm e baddoor...afreen afreen
iss ko parh ke yaad aa rhay hain do sher
duniya ki mehfilon se ukta gya hun ya rub
kya lutf anjuman ka jab dil hi bujh gya ho...................iqbal (waisay kya iqbal ke zamanay main bi actoress anjuman hoti thi??)
doosra sher ghalib ka
dil doondhta hy phir wohi fursat ke raat din
baithay rahain tasawwar e janaan kiyay huway.............(aisay fursat ke lamhaat chacha ghalib hi afford kr saktay hon gay ya phir tab possible hy jab banda pension age main pohnch jai..kiyon sir ji???)
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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Jul, 03 2012
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