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hmmm koe bichara ya bichari nhe hota wo bichari tb bnti hy jb daikhny waly ki ankh bichari ho jaye gor farmana kci ko apny sy kam tar mat samjny ki galti krna waqt kb khail khel jaye kuch pta nhe chalta stay blessd
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By:
MARIA RIAZ,
HNBD
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Jun, 29 2012
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ye saweera kah kah poch jati hain:)P usski nazer main yaha k sare shair xyz hain kamaal hai nawaz sahib aap hum se zada achi tahra se wazahat ker de bechari :)P
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By:
washma khan,
moscow
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Jun, 26 2012
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Real Poetry YEh Hai.Boht KHUSHi KHUi NAWAZ Bhai APKO pArh Ke keh Koi To Sahi Meaning Main Poetry Likh Raha Hai Yahan.AAp Jaisay Poet ko bohat Agay Jana Chahiyay.I am Publisher Of Books.If You Want To publsh Your Book It will Be honour For my Firm.Thank.I will email U Too
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By:
zaman khan,
LAHORE
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Jun, 26 2012
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very nice poetry,I like such
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By:
akhtar mirza,
karachi
on
Jun, 10 2012
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thek farmaya ap ny nawaz bhai poetry vlgr na ho to dil me bass jati hy aur hr achy sensabl poet ko is baat ka khyayl rhkna prta hy hr haal me usa ka naam achy shahroo me ho
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By:
maria riaz,
hnbd
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Jun, 08 2012
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سر ! میں ایک شاعر کے دل کی بات جاننا چاہتی تھی کہ جب وہ لکھتا ھے تو وہ
اصل میں کیا کہنا چاہتا ھے ؟ ہر پڑھنے والے کی اپنی اپنی سمجھ ھوا کرتی ھے -
جس جواب کی میں منتظر تھی وہ آپ سے نہیں ملا - - - خیر
کھل گیا “ راز “ زندگانی کا -
موت سے اسکا بھرم ٹوٹ گیا -
بس ساری تفصیل اس راز میں پنہاں ھے - - - شکریہ |
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By:
sawera,
karachi
on
Jun, 08 2012
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thnx maria sister for liking and appreciation...yes dear poetry dil say hi nikalti hai aor kya lever ya lungs say nikalti hai??just joking ... waisay hi sad mood tha to sad likh di...humour likhna is the most tough....sad likhna thora easy hota hai so likh di ....but i mostly like humour poetry like anwar masood,zameer jafferi,khalid masood,inam ul haq javed,dilwar figar,niaz sawati,prof. inayat ali ,sarfraz shahid etc...shyri sabhi achhi hoti hai bas shart ye hai keh suljhi hui ho aor uss main vulgarity na ho...khush rhain hmesha
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 07 2012
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Thnx uzma for liking..yes topic to waqi mizaj say mil raha...boht OKHA lag rha hai sad likhna..laikin chalta hai sab kuch i think..kabi kabi likh lenay main waisay harj bhi koi nhin hay.. bohat saray log kisi ko khush dekh ke bi jealous ho jatay hain..so shyd ye sad parh ke wo khush ho jain..itni sari romantic poetry ke baad achha hai ye sad bi...samjha karain .. jaisay car ke peechhay black cloth piece laga detay hain aisay hi samjh lain issay...takeh raqeebon ki nazar e bad na lagay...
iss se pehlay keh koi aor kahin se fatwa de de ya koi new stroy bna le,,,Once again thnx alot for liking.keep smiling always
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 07 2012
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Thnx Ahsan bhai for always liking and appreciation.Your cmnts are honour for me and your poetry is honour for hamariweb..khus rhain hmesha
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 07 2012
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thnx swera sister for liking and appreciation.
zindgi hai hi assembling of secrets,wishes and ambitions..kisi shyr ne kaha hay
zindgi kya hai,chand ajza ka husn e tarteeb
maot kya hai inhi ajza ka pareshan hona...
ya iqbal said
zindgani ki haqeeqat koh kun ke dil se poochh
joo e sheer o tesha o sang e garan hai zindgi.........
i hope u get tashreeh now..phir bi na samjh aay to apnay ird gird ki duniya ko dekhain,life ko obseve kerain,sab raaz khul jain gay.
apnay man main doob ker paa ja suragh e zindgi
too agr mera nhin banta ,na ban,apna to ban...........................iqbal.
khush rahain and duaon main yaad rakhain.god bless u always
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
Jun, 07 2012
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nawaz bhai lag rha hy ap k dil sy nilakli bht hi sad poetry hy :-(
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By:
maria riaz,
hnbd
on
Jun, 06 2012
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وہ “ راز “ کیا تھا زندگانی کا ؟ ؟ ؟
جو اتنے ساروں کا بھرم ٹوٹ گیا -
آپکی غزل وضاحت طلب ھے -
مہربانی ھو گی جو آپ تشریح فرمائیں -
شکریہ ۔ |
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By:
sawera,
karachi
on
Jun, 06 2012
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Bht achi shayari hai.
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By:
Maria riaz,
Hnbd
on
Jun, 06 2012
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itni sad ghazal Q...?
technically tau very god but topic aap k mizaj se zra ht k hai...sad sad not bad but Y so sad
lekin ye shair:*
ham faqeeroN k aik sajdai se
tajdaron ka bharam TooT gaya
Hmmmmmmmmmm........ Excellent
hamesha khush rahain
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
on
Jun, 05 2012
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V Nice
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By:
AF(Lucky),
Saudi Arabia
on
Jun, 05 2012
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Hum FaqeeroN K Aik Sajde Se.... TaajdaroN Ka Bharam Toot Gaya.... Buhat Khoob Nawaz Bhai.... Achi Rahi Yeh Takhleeq.... Yunhi Likhte Rahiye..... Khush Rahiye.....
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By:
Ahsan Mirza,
Karachi
on
Jun, 05 2012
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