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Ahsan Bhai,
Wah Kya Khoob Likha hai janab.
Ibteda me Hame'n is baat pe Hairat thi k itni Khoobiyo'n wala larrka abhi tak Kanwara kesey hai tu poem k doosrey hissey me is ka jawab bhi mil gaya. Waqaee janab Rishtey aasmano'n pe bantey aur Court me toot'tey hain.
Bohat Umda namkeen takhleeq hai, perrh ker lutf aaya.
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By:
Sarwar Farhan Sarwar,
Karachi
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Feb, 22 2013
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Buhat Buhat Shukriya Hasan Bhai..... Khush Rahiye.....
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By:
Ahsan Mirza,
Karachi
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Jun, 29 2012
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Bahut khoob , Ahsan saheb . mubarakbaad qubool kijiye . kalaam ki bhi aur payaam ki bhi .
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By:
F.H.SIDDIQUI,
Lucknow(India)
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Jun, 21 2012
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Maria App Ki Hansi Iss Baat Ki Zamanat Hai K Koshish Kamyaab Hogayi..... Pasandeedgi Per Mamnoon HooN App Ka..... Hamesha Khush Rahiye.....
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By:
Ahsan Mirza,
Karachi
on
Jun, 14 2012
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Charm Bilkul Hai..... Aur Yeh Bhi Haqiqat Hai Shairy MaiN Mazaah Tarashna Aik Intehai Mushkil Fail Hai. HaaN Khayalaat Kabhi Kabhi Aatay HaiN Tu Try Hoti Rehti Hai..... Iss Hawale Se Bhi..... Hosla'afzai Per Mamnoon HooN..... Hamesha Khush Rahiye.....
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By:
Ahsan Mirza,
Karachi
on
Jun, 14 2012
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hahahahaha v nice
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By:
maria riaz,
hnbd
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Jun, 11 2012
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nice ahsan sahib..kabhi kabhi namkeen ghazal bi likha kerain issi tarah...humour poetry is the most tough poetry no doubt but it has its own charm...nice to read
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
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Jun, 10 2012
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