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ایک حسیں پل کی خوشیوں نے اتنا سخی بنایا کہ
اپنی چاہت کا سرمایہ اَس ایک پل پہ لَٹا بیٹھی ہوں |
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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Sep, 06 2012
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buhat buhat shukria itni ziada pazeerai k Dear & Sweet Maria Riaz...
Haaey dear kahan Parveen Shakir jesi Maroof shaera aur kahan ye gumnam hsti...khair aap ki muhabbat aap ka Husn e Zauq...
jahan tk hunr ki t hai tau Rabb ki enayat hai Allah tala ne hr insan koe na koe hnr enayt frmaya hai bs insan ka kam hai k wo apni justju kre khud ko pehchane khud mein kia hai usay tlas kreDuaon k lye Khas tau se mamnoon hon
mukhlis doston ki duaen buht zruri hoti hain insank lye zndgi mein
Allah Ta'alla aap ko hemesha kushyan aur kamybian enayt frmaeY AMEEN
khush rahain hamesha
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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May, 10 2012
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Dear Areej mind nahi kia haqiqat btai hai agay aap jo b kahen jo b samjhen again saying mind nahi kia....
khush rahin bs khush raha karen dusron k bare mein ziada na socha kare read karen enjoy karen comments karen jo ji chahai karen azadi rai ka haq hr insan ko hai lekin ehtiat khas kr htmi rai qaem krne mein muhtat rehna zruri hai
be happy alwyas
Allah Bless You
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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May, 10 2012
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THANK YOU AAPI .AAP NE MIND HI KER LIYA.BUT LAGTA TO SAB KO YAHI HAI KEH ......AGAY AAPKO PATA HAI JABHI TO HAR TARF WAHAN AAP YAHAN WO.HMAIN KYA KHUSH RAHAIN
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By:
Areej Manzoor,
lhr
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May, 08 2012
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Bht he khoob uzma api ap lafzo ka end kr dyte ho ap k bd koe naya lafaz bht s0ch kr likhna parta ha hr shair me jo tahkliq ha kya kehna my ideal personlty :-) ap k hath itna hunar itna .ALlah kare aur aey ap k hath bht he aey muje to ap parvin shakir ka 2nd janam lgti ho.:-) anyway Allah bls u
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By:
Maria riaz,
Har0nbd
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May, 08 2012
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@wO TO HAMAIN PATA HAI AAPI
Areej Manzoor, LHR
Dear kuchh nahi pata hota kisiko kisi k dil ka haal
imkan tau iss bt ka bhi hai k shyd kisi ne aap k dil kiu bt apne lfzon mein byan kr di ho (may b possible may b not infact just ... imkan..?)
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By:
uzma,
Lahore
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May, 07 2012
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wO TO HAMAIN PATA HAI AAPI
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By:
Areej Manzoor,
LHR
on
May, 06 2012
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every vese is outstanding...you know well to describe..excillent and matchless poetry..unique with new ideas..
dil ke band darwazon pe halki si dasatk paa kar..very very impressive
waisay dil ke band darwazon pe halki si dastak hi hoti hai ...tha tha dharam dharam thora kertay hain....
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By:
muhammad nawaz,
sangla hill
on
May, 05 2012
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GOOD............................
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By:
sumera ataria,
g
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May, 04 2012
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very nice khass tor per 4th shair very nice.
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By:
NEHAL,
Gujranwala
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May, 04 2012
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